Magazine Revision Critique for Logan

The background and font used is appealing for an advertisement because it is clean and allows the main object to be in focus. The idea of the headphones is a good idea but they could be formed into some sort of shape, such as a radio or iPod. The headphones are not cut out cleanly and kind of don't look like headphones. The advertisement could also use body text instead of just a title. The colors of the advertisement are good.